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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment . what are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

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Nowadays, growing the number of
students
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 to
their
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evaluate
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 by
exam
, rather than with continual assessment. The way of
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the exam
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exam
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 can
be quickly identify
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 top
students
, while one of the negative points of exams includes the fact
it
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 can
creates
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stress
 among
students
. At
first
, I think , everybody likes that show to others he is better than, one
others
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 and competition is a good feeling that can be strengthened by exams between
students
 and it
lead
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 to
students
 are developed during
study
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 and identify among the other
students
. I remembered when I was in high school a number of
students
 before the
exam
 went to
library
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 for
studing
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studying
.
secondly
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take
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exam
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the exam
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 is very easy and is not complex for teachers and it
a
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rapid assessment for
evaluate
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students
’ knowledge.
On the other hand
, the
exam
 has
stress
 and everybody in every age when has
a
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exam
 usually experiences
degree
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a degree
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 of
stress
 from low to very intense and it affects on their mood and
may be
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maybe
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 it causes psychological disorders.
Thus
 it may
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adverse
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an adverse
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 effect and
it
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becomes
as
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an obstacle
their
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 growth.
Moreover
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 we can not assess correctly by
exam
 ,because some
ability
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abilities
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 and skills
not
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are not
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determinate
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 by taking
a
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an
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exam
. In
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conclusion
conclution
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conclusion
, taking
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the exam
an exam
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exam
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exams
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 can
has
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have
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positive
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a positive
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effect
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effects
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such
 as
lead
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leading
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 to competition and
ti
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it
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 is
as
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apply
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a way for rapid assessment to help their teacher but it may produce
stress
 and not
accurate
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an accurate
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 method.we should use
combination
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a combination
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the
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 ways.
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