You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter, Say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

Dear Mr Perera, I am writing
this
letter to convey that I was amazed after watching your performance at the Youth centre
last
Friday. Though I was reluctant to attend
to
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the event that day due to my studies, now I am
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grateful
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for the opportunity I received since I could forget everything which was stressing me after listening to your attractive voice. The songs were very thoughtful and your voice suited well for the feelings.
Furthermore
, I am impressed with the range of songs that you poses and the way acted on the stage.
In addition
to that, I must inform you that I am
also
studying at the Visual and Performing Arts University. Singing was my hobby from school ages and
that is
where I started dreaming
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career. I have a duet which was composed by one of my colleagues and we are looking for a senior artist to sing along to promote the creation in the industry.
Therefore
, I will be
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if you are capable of supporting us. I am waiting for a favourable response from you to achieve one of my dreams. Yours sincerely, TSP
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