Some people believe that hard work is vital for success, while others think that education guarantees success more than anything. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
Some
people
think that hard work
is most important to achieve success
, whilst others believe that with an education you can get success
no matter are you hardworking or not. I personally believe that to achieve success
education as well as hard work
both factors are important. This
essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are some reasons that hard work
is important because nowadays there is cutthroat competition among people
and everybody wants to win. This
win cannot possible without hard work
. For instance
, one of my friends is a state-level topper in the board exam and he is more pressurised by his teacher and parents to do more hard work
to maintain his position. Most of his time he spends in a library to achieve success
.
On the other hand
, some people
think that education makes people
sure of their success
. I think, if a person has knowledge of something and do more effort then
he can achieve success
. For instance
, my cousin angelica was a topper at the university and she had overconfident that I had a degree and I can achieve whatever I want. Consequently
, now she is unemployed because she does not hard work
to get a job. She just shows her degree to get a job but she has no other skills.
To conclude, in my opinion, I think that person can achieve success
If he does hard work
and also
has the degree to become a successful person in his life.Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on
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