Special programs for social integration and help are better alternatives than harsher prison sentences for minor crimes. Do you support or oppose this opinion? Explain your position.
Some
people
believe that there should be special programs and help should be given to criminal who commits minor crimes
. I agree with this
notion. This
essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, infractions become common in this
world. Some people
commit breaches to fulfil their needs. When they do not get jobs in any place to fulfil their needs they commit misconduct. There should be no punishment for a minor crime. For instance
, if a person steals a loaf of bread to eat then
there should not be a punishment for them. Instead
of punishing them, I think that they should provide assistance such
as sending them to the old age home to serve old people
there. Moreover
, here they will serve and earn money for themselves.
In addition
, arrange seminars for them and tell them the consequences of committing crimes
.if harsher punishment is given to people
who commit minor crimes
can become a gangster and will commit major crimes
such
as killing someone, bank robberies and so on. Furthermore
, there should not punished
for minor Change the verb form
punish
be punished
crimes
instead
if a criminal is a child then
send him to a school so that he can get an education and can become a good and responsible citizen. If a person is young or old then
they can send them orphanage or old age care home to serve them.
To conclude, I personally believe that there should not be puniy for minor crimes
. The government should arrange special programs such
send them to orphanages homes, senior citizens' homes or provide
education.Wrong verb form
providing
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