Special programs for social integration and help are better alternatives than harsher prison sentences for minor crimes. Do you support or oppose this opinion? Explain your position.

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Some
people
believe that there should be special programs and help should be given to criminal who commits minor
crimes
. I agree with
this
notion.
This
essay will discuss my viewpoints in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, infractions become common in
this
world. Some
people
commit breaches to fulfil their needs. When they do not get jobs in any place to fulfil their needs they commit misconduct. There should be no punishment for a minor crime.
For instance
, if a person steals a loaf of bread to eat
then
there should not be a punishment for them.
Instead
of punishing them, I think that they should provide assistance
such
as sending them to the old age home to serve old
people
there.
Moreover
, here they will serve and earn money for themselves.
In addition
, arrange seminars for them and tell them the consequences of committing
crimes
.if harsher punishment is given to
people
who commit minor
crimes
can become a gangster and will commit major
crimes
such
as killing someone, bank robberies and so on.
Furthermore
, there should not
punished
Change the verb form
punish
be punished
show examples
for minor
crimes
instead
if a criminal is a child
then
send him to a school so that he can get an education and can become a good and responsible citizen. If a person is young or old
then
they can send them orphanage or old age care home to serve them. To conclude, I personally believe that there should not be puniy for minor
crimes
. The government should arrange special programs
such
send them to orphanages homes, senior citizens' homes or
provide
Wrong verb form
providing
show examples
education.
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