Your local council is closing the children’s playground in your locality as not many children visit the park. Write a letter to the council requesting not to close it
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
I hope Capitalize word
Madam
this
letter finds you well.I am writing this
letter to request not to close the children's playground, seeing that this
place
is extremely essential for our early life. Moreover
, sometimes the adult spends time in this
environment.
It is true that some people do not use it but if I want to discuss playground
I should say I have been working a lot of time and I am fully busy and Correct article usage
the playground
this
place
aids me to keep my children happy by going there and also
I am relaxed when I go to the playground and such
of my thinks.
On the other hand
,this
environment makes a friendly place
for the inhibition and we are used to spending time with other neighbours and enjoy with play our child and speak
toghadar and Wrong verb form
speaking
also
I believe this
is the only place
of
keep nice our climate because as you know our city is entirely industry so it is fully vital for ours so it is completely useful for us.
Writing for your reply,
Thank you for your hard work and dedication.
Yours Faithfully,
Saeed Foroughi Nia.Change preposition
to
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task response
Ensure that your letter addresses all the points required in the prompt. Also, stick to the formal tone of a letter and avoid informal language.
coherence and cohesion
Work on organizing your ideas in a logical sequence. Also, use appropriate connectors to link your ideas more effectively.
lexical resource
Expand your vocabulary and use more precise and varied words to express your ideas. Additionally, review the usage of idiomatic expressions and collocations.
grammatical range
Pay attention to sentence structure and grammar usage. Review your writing for subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and use of articles and prepositions.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite