Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Consumption of unwholesome

food

Use synonyms

has been posing a threat to not only individuals but

also

Linking Words

society.

Therefore

Linking Words

, it is suggested that the government should levy a

tax

Use synonyms

on

this

Linking Words

kind of

food

Use synonyms

. At the same time, some people are expressing strong opposition against the 'fat

tax

Use synonyms

' since it is discriminatory and unnecessary.

This

Linking Words

essay will discuss both sides of the argument and weigh the merits and demerits of

tax

Use synonyms

imposition on unhealthy

food

Use synonyms

. The rationale behind the introduction of a ‘fat

tax

Use synonyms

’

based

Add a missing verb

is based

show examples

on the fact that it can reduce the production and consumption of unhealthy

food

Use synonyms

and

thus

Linking Words

protect consumers' health. It is obvious that the price of unwholesome

food

Use synonyms

will increase by virtue of taxation. It

then

Linking Words

discourages people from purchasing and consuming

food

Use synonyms

detrimental to their physical well-being. Once the demand has declined, producers of unsanitary

food

Use synonyms

are forced to look for a shift toward the manufacture of wholesome

food

Use synonyms

.

As a result

Linking Words

, the market for

this

Linking Words

type of

food

Use synonyms

will shrink, leading to its disappearance.

Nevertheless

Linking Words

, the fairness and necessity of

this

Linking Words

measure should

also

Linking Words

be taken into consideration. In a free market, imposing a levy on a particular kind of product will contribute to unfair competition.

This

Linking Words

action could put many enterprises on the brink of bankruptcy, particularly small- and medium-sized companies that do not possess adequate resources for a production transition.

Moreover

Linking Words

, the imposition of a ‘fat

tax

Use synonyms

’ could end up a financial burden on the poor.

For example

Linking Words

, in Vietnam, street

food

Use synonyms

, which is made and consumed on the sidewalk and is exposed to many unhygienic factors

such

Linking Words

as smog, might be considered "unhealthy" by the well-off; it,

however

Linking Words

, is the primary source of

food

Use synonyms

for low-income residents due to reasonable prices.

Hence

Linking Words

, forcing the financially incapable to pay an extra

tax

Use synonyms

is

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

evidence of social inequality and

thus

Linking Words

likely to provoke resentment. In conclusion, a

tax

Use synonyms

on unhealthy

food

Use synonyms

could deter people from consuming it.

However

Linking Words

, from my perspective, its adverse impacts are much more severe since it can lead to the collapse of

food

Use synonyms

production companies vulnerable to financial disruption.

This

Linking Words

taxation is

also

Linking Words

prone to social resentment when the right to obtain affordable

food

Use synonyms

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the financially incompetent is violated.