Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The choices can change our
life
. Some people
, including me, hold the opinion that they face numerous options to select these days; however
, others opine that most things in their life
are mandatory. This
essay delves into the matter further
and concludes at the end.
It is argued that some people
find their life
full of obligatory choices. They believe that they can choose their educational field or follow their skill or talent such
as artistic inclination. However
, it is not guaranteed their future career, and in the other words, they have to everythying
to make a living. Correct your spelling
everything
However
, this
group does not consider the vigorous attempt of successful groups, which work in their favorable
job field experienced and under gigantic pressure to achieve success. Actually, they chose that they did not strive as high as the successful Change the spelling
favourable
people
. For example
, Jim Carry said that his father was a talented person that
he could have been a comedian; Correct word choice
and that
however
, he chose to not try his chance.
People
are in charge of their life
's route. If we look at some of the professional soccer players, we will find out that everyone has many options to select.
Change preposition
from.
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo shows a brilliant performance at 37-year-olds, whereas Jack Wilshire ended up his career at age 26. In this
case, the former and the latter selected the professional and unprofessional life
, respectively, although
both were talented. In addition
, opting for an option to achieve something is not a linear path. It means that people
might select the option but they do not hit their crown achievement. In this
case, they should know that following what they chose has not
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no
straightforward
outcome, but Add an article
the straightforward
a straightforward
it
is more like a long-awaited journey. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, a
stock market trader was in Correct word choice
if a
red
for a while, he should not be disappointed Correct article usage
the red
of
his decision because over the long term his approach would be profitable.
In conclusion, all Change the preposition
in
with
by
about
people
have to opt for many choices in their life
, whereas they might face some obligatory decision
. But in general, Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
people
can select their destiny through decisions.Submitted by vengateshkr on
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