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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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A big majority of
students
 rely on the
internet
 because it is very convenient. The
internet
 is a very useful tool but to what extent do we
use
 it plus you can always get your
information
 from it but there’s always fake news false facts and negative sites for young people that get their
information
 wrong. They’re a lot of benefits and non-benefits when using the
internet
 as a
student
 to help with your studies when you cant get a
library
 card or can’t afford a book I agree at a certain level it should be limited. As a
student
 that needs to get
information
 as fast as possible, he can find wrong
information
 and believe it to be true. The
student
 can
firstly
 be limited in his research due to false answers
also
students
 should visit the
library
 because the
library
 is a trustable source and no false answers and the
student
 can get his
information
 from it.
Secondly
, they can learn how to
use
 it in a better way to not get misled by
information
lastly
 they can search the
information
 from a trusted and reliable source to get their
information
 many
students
 fail due to getting false answers. A hand full of
students
 can’t afford a
library
 card or might not afford it and can’t reach the place due to the place they live and the distance so they are forced to
use
 the
internet
 and sometimes they are misled.
Majority
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 of those already know the
internet
 so they know their ways to get trustable
information
 but that doesn’t mean all
students
 know how to. Many
students
 don’t have the money to purchase
information
 or
the
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books so the
internet
 is the only option but those who have the option should be limited and taught how to
use
 it I agree at a certain level with
this
 statement that
students
 should be restricted when using the
internet
 for
information
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