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Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing. do you agree or disagree?

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The pie chart gives information about anthropology graduates’ decisions after Bachelor's degree graduation, while the table illustrates the income for 3 types of anthropology careers with 5 years of experience. Overall, the data in the chart and table suggest that most of the graduates are employed in full-time jobs, whereas the minority is studied in higher education and working part-time at the same time.
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 for 5 years are likely to receive payments of more than 100,000 dollars. The pie chart provides a breakdown of what undergraduates did after getting a degree. More than a half were working full-time, followed by got recruited for part-time
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 and unemployed which stood at 15% and 8% respectively. It can be seen that part-time
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 and postgrad study sector is the smallest proportion, with only 5% from the whole. The table indicates the majority of anthropologists who
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 in the government sector got paid more than 100,000 dollars, while 40% of freelance consultants received earnings equally around 75,000 to 99,999 and 100,000 dollars.
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, workers in private companies mostly got half of a million to three-quarters of a million after 5 years of employment.
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