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computer these days can translate all kinds of language with greatee accuracy.Hence, our children will not need to learn more language in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

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In our modern day, there are a lot of people debating whether they should or shouldn't learn new languages
such
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, Spanish and Japanese. I personally disagree with
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 as many of us love to travel the world and explore new places and cultures. So why not learn the languages of some countries that might help you in the future. I will continue to explain everything needed to support my opinion in
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Firstly
, a lot of kids would rather not waste time on learning hard words that are not English or what they speak but
this
 could teach children many new topics.
secondly
, it could help them realize their new potential that they never knew they had.
Lastly
,
this
 could make children interested in learning more ways to speak a different tongue.
Moreover
, children learning a new language could help
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 find their careers as many humans have taken an interest in jobs involving others with different speaking tounges.
In addition
, having to know to speak in multiple ways could help you in some situations that are difficult
for example
, you would like to ask about a certain dish that can only be found in a place like no other.
Furthermore
, as learning to speak in other languages can be a
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bit difficult, it can still help you in good ways. it will be a long run to understand people you thought you could never but at the end of the finishing line, it will be worth it.
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