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The ways people interact with each other have been changing dramatically for the past thirty years because of text messaging. In what ways has text messaging affected the types of interactions people have? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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 thirty recent years, human interaction ways have been changed extremely because of advanced technology,
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 as text messaging. It affected the interaction of individuals in many ways
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 as remote communication, remote learning, or sharing ideas on social media.
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 of all, nowadays because of text messaging,
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 can communicate directly from long distances
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 as between two continents, or booking,
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 working, learning, and booking becomes more convenient. In some difficult situations, remote communication
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 serves as the only suitable way.
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, when the covid-19 pandemic was serious, infected students must learn at home and attend remote classes.
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,
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 now can reserve flight tickets or dinner seats by sending messages. On social media sites like Facebook, and tweeter, individuals can share a brief of news or an idea by writing a status. Following that, others can discuss with the status owner. One of my favourite influencers, who is a Vietnamese professor living in the US, often shares many talented ideas or deep viewpoints on social issues on his private pages.
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 sometimes share fake news or strange idea in order to influence others or appeal to them. In March 2022 a businessman named Ng V Q shared a lot of fake news in order to increase his stock value. Because of that, many
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 lost their savings money. In inclusion,
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 technology development became equipment for some humans to break the law, it
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 serves as a part of standard life needs. In my experience, it has more pros than cons effects. .
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