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The noise levels have impacted the quality of our life, what are the causes of this problem and what should be done to solve it.

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Noise
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pollution
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 has become a serious problem in urban and industrial areas of the world, affecting human health and the
environment
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.
Noise
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 from
traffic
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, construction, and entertainment places has been increasing as cities grow and industrial activities increase.
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 essay will discuss the causes and effects of
noise
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pollution
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 and
also
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 suggest some possible solutions to
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 growing problem. Vehicular
traffic
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 is one of the major sources of
noise
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pollution
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. In highly populous cities, the continuous running of cars, buses, and trains produces incessant
noise
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. Industrial activities
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 as manufacturing and construction involve machinery and equipment that emit high volumes. Urbanization increases the situation with construction sites almost running day and night to cater to the demand for houses and infrastructure.
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, places of entertainment like nightclubs, concerts, and public events add immensely to the
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noise
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, especially in city
centers
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. These sources cumulatively make
noise
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pollution
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 unavoidable in modern urban life. The impact of
noise
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pollution
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 on human health is deep. Long-term exposure to high
noise
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 levels can cause loss of hearing ability, stress, sleep disturbance, and even cardiovascular problems.
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, people who reside near airports and highways have a higher probability of contracting stress-related sicknesses.
Noise
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pollution
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 disrupts the natural
environment
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, impacting wildlife by interfering with the communication of animals and migratory movement. Birds and marine species,
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, face several problems finding their mates and, in many cases,
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 reaching other territories because of excessive
noise
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 that may jeopardize biodiversity. In the following section, several ways to reduce the growing threat of
noise
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pollution
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 are explained.
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, strict government regulations are being demanded concerning industrial
noise
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 emission and urban planning. Sound barriers around highways and areas with much industry will prevent
noise
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 from spreading. The enhancement of public transport and
traffic
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 with electrical-type vehicles will significantly cut down on
traffic
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noise
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.
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 could be minimized at personal levels by using appliances that generate less
noise
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 and abiding by the curfews set aside concerning
noise
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 in residential areas. A
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 increase in green spaces,
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 as parks and urban forests, can act like natural sound barriers to decrease
noise
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 levels in cities.
Noise
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pollution
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 is an imminent problem that needs immediate action
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 its hazardous effect on human health and the
environment
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. Society can curb these negative impacts of
noise
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pollution
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 by enforcing more rules and regulations, promoting modes of transport that are eco-friendly, and increasing awareness among people. Only
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 will future generations be able to enjoy a noisier, healthier, and more peaceful
environment
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.
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task achievement
Ensure each main point is fully expanded with illustrative examples or evidence to fully support your argument.
coherence cohesion
Consider using more linking words and phrases to further strengthen cohesion and ensure paragraphs flow smoothly.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and effective structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
coherence cohesion
A broad range of vocabulary and complex sentence structures are used, making the essay engaging and demonstrating linguistic proficiency.
task achievement
The essay addresses the question by identifying several causes and solutions related to noise pollution, offering a 'complete response'.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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