Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the number of
professionals
is increasing day by day,
people
start to discuss
about
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that
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if they should be trained and
work
in the same place or they should do their job
in
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everywhere they want. Both of these two views have their own features, I prefer
professionals
to
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who
work
in
country
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where they are trained will be convenient and help them promote their skills. On the one hand, when
professionals
work
in the same environment as they studied , they are familiar with local
people
and lands,
this
is the most important factor.
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working environment, it is more convenient to get knowledge and find suitable companies or jobs.
Besides
, there are some careers required to be controlled by local
professionals
.
Therefore
, it should be better to
work
and train in the same country. On the other hand, some
people
consider that working abroad can give them
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to receive a great deal of income. With high-paid salaries, they can live easier and more comfortable since
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cost of living is too expensive.
However
, when they do their jobs in other countries, they have to adjust themselves
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different cultures and lifestyles.
This
not only can make them waste lots of time, but it can
also
disturb their quality of
work
. To sum up,
although
working abroad can bring
people
more income, I believe that
professionals
should do their jobs in the country where they were trained because of convenience in
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environment and good conditions to develop
careness
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careless
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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