It is the job of governments and companies to deal with the huge environmental problems which we face. Individuals on their own can do little or nothing’. What is your opinion about this statement?

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Nowadays climate

change

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has gathered more and more important since the situation has worsened dramatically in the

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two decades. Some people believe that the solution to

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huge problem must be tackled by big

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and governments since the action of one single person will not be able to

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the situation drastically. I do not agree with

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statement, since every little action matters and only together we can try to stop climate

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, it is true that large

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pollute more than single individuals, but they only answer to a need.

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, motor industries

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as BMW or Toyota are still producing diesel cars because customers are still buying them, which will increase pollution on an enormous scale. If we preferred electric engines, they would stop producing diesel cars and focus on electric ones.

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, not all cases are the same, there are

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that can not

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no means to obtain the same results with less waste; hospitals are great examples, in fact in order to avoid infectious diseases or complications in the operating room, everything has to be changed.

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, every business works because people support it, so if we stop using products that are not eco-friendly, we may reach a fantastic result. There are so many

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out there that do not care how much they pollute, but if we start to pay attention,

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can happen.

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, starting to buy only shampoo or shower soap that are producing zero waste, is a way to push other

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to do the same. In conclusion, I believe that each action matters, that all together we can do something for our planet and even if big

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pollute more than single individuals, the moment we start making wiser choices is the time they will start listening.

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