Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while other thing it is a waste of time discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Art

is

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children

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. A faction of

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propound

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that

art

is a vital subject for young ones at school while others advocate it is useless.

This

essay would delve into both

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viewpoints

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view points

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and try to arrive at a rational

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conclusion

conculsion

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conclusion

.

First

and foremost, for improving their personal skills

art

is an essential subject for learners in school.

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to

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, in

this

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competitive

competative

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competitive

world

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any one extracurricular activities are beneficial, not only for expressing but

also

for earning money through

this

.

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, to

enhancing

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the juvenile's

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inborn

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in born

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ability and

to

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get

a

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relief from any mental depression.

Besides

,

art

is

aid

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an aid

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to teenagers for financial independence.

For instance

, many famous

persons

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people

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in different

industry

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industries

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like musicians,

dancers

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and dancers

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all are grown with their

art

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artistic

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ability in their childhood itself.

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Nevertheless

, professional stability is an important thing for each

pupils

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life.

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from that, each and every subject plays a vital role

,

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because scholars should know about all subjects it may

useful

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in their future life. On

the

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top of all,

these settlement

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in future with high remuneration only through improving

the

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professional skills. In short, other subjects give more knowledge about the world but, for enhancing passion

art

is an essential one. Ergo, I strongly believe that

art

is

an

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imperative for

youngones

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young ones

.