Marina has just started a new course at college and her tutor has asked her to write him a letter telling him something about herself.

Dear Tutor I am writing

this

letter to

telling

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you something about myself.

First

of

all

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I would to tell you about my scientific nature I am a law student, and I

choice

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this

major to help people

for

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in

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their life,

also

I worked at

law

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a law

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firm as a paralegal I worked there

for

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apply

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four

time

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times

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a week at 8 am until midnight,

however

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at the

weekends

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I spent a lot of

time

to studying my curriculum. I usually spent my free

time

with my friends we used to go

the

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to the

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Riyadh Mall which is very popular in Riyadh.

In addition

to

that

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I had a

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part-time

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part

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part-time

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time

job in a shop. My father owns a supermarket, and I

helping

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him in the evening. I worked

their

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when my father

calling

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me, so I don’t have a specific

time

to help my father at his shop.

This

is a brief description of my background. Best Regards Marina