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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of learning a foreign
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 is debatable. It is believed by some that travelling or working in a foreign country is the only
reason
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 for learning a
second
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language
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.
However
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, others suggest that there are other reasons. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both perspectives but I agree with the former.
First
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 of all, learning a new
language
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 is not easy at all,
this
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 is because it needs time and effort.
Therefore
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, there must be a goal in order to do it,
such
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 as travelling to or working in a foreign nation.
In addition
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,
people
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 who support
this
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 statement believe that it is time-wasting to learn a new
language
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instead
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 of learning something useful.
For example
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, knowing how to fix broken things is considered better than learning a new
language
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 without using it.
On the other hand
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, there are a plethora of
people
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 who believe that there are other reasons to learn a
second
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language
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 rather than travel or work in other countries,
such
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 as, taking it as a
hobby
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, or even following a
hobby
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 that requires learning a new
language
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.
In other words
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, going to as many countries as possible has become more popular recently, if someone wants to do
this
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hobby
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, and not speak English
for example
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,(which is considered a worldwide
language
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),
this
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 would be a significant
reason
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 to learn a foreign
language
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. A growing body of research suggests that more than 20% of
people
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 learn a
second
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language
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 as a
hobby
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. In conclusion,
although
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 there are plenty of
people
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 who believe that travel to or working in a foreign country is not the only
reason
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 why they should learn a new
language
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, others suggest that it is enough
reason
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 to do it, which I believe
also
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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