he diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowchart illustrates the various stages of a salmon's cycle life.
Overall
, there are 3 different steps in the life span of
this
sort of
fish
with the egg and ending with the adult stage. As the diagram shows,
firstly
it begins with the hatching of eggs. when salmons go up the river to spawn, the eggs move slowly toward the floor of the stream among small stones and reeds.
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During
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this
time, after a period of about 5 to 6 months, the baby
fish
that are born are called fry and are about 3 to 8 cm long. The fry soon swims to the lower water which is quite fast flowing.
Secondly
, after living in
this
place for a period of about 4 years, the fry gradually grows into a bigger
fish
that measures about 12 to 15 cm in length, named
smolt
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a smolt
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. At
this
moment, it is ready to migrate into the open sea.
then
, in there, the smolt lives for roughly about 5 years
where
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it eventually grows into the final step. At
this
point of its life cycle, it is approximately 70 to 76 cm long.
Finally
, the adult
fish
swims back to the same location where they were born, to lay their eggs and the cycle starts all over again.
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