The manager of your company wants a few suggestions for the improvement of the company. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter, give at least one possible suggestion state how it could benefit the company explain the requirements for its implementation

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter in response to your invite for a few suggestions that would help improve the company's performance. As a
Relationship
Manager-Credit, working in
this
company, I would like to provide two vital suggestions in the areas of enhancing the productivity of the
team
through altering the seating arrangements and improving delivery Turn Around Time(TAT) by proactive involvement of Credit support officers(CSO) in the meeting. The present seating arrangement of the
team
with the
Relationship
Manager in a separate
Cabin
and Credit Support Officer along with an associate occupying another
cabin
is hindering effective communication between the two and delays the deliverables. Any client request doesn’t effectively percolate to the entire
team
and the
team
completely lacks prioritising of tasks due to
this
barrier. To mitigate
this
issue, I suggest removing the separate
cabin
arrangement for the
Relationship
Manager and providing three cubicles within the same
cabin
for the
Relationship
Manager, CSO and Associate so that any discussions between the client and any member of the
team
are easily passed on to others.
This
would improve the productivity of the
team
by avoiding repetitive tasks and improper communication
Furthermore
, the CSO isn't included as a part of the review meetings held by our Senior and Top management
as a result
of which, they lack knowledge of the Key Performance Areas.
Hence
I suggest including the CSOs as a part of the
team
meetings so that they
also
get to know the expectations of top management and get to plan the tasks
accordingly
to improve productivity and increase TAT. Thank you for providing me with the opportunity to express my ideas and I hope my suggestions are of help for the betterment of our organisation. Yours faithfully, Vignesh G
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