You bought a laptop while you were travelling abroad. When you reached your native country you realised that some items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the representative of the company. In your letter, give details of the laptop and from where you bought it explain what has happened say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to claim about the lost accessories from the laptop package.

Last

month, I had to visit abroad to attend the business meeting

therefore

, I bought a new laptop from your brand, which is 15 inches in size, silver metallic in colour and has num lock keyboard with a built-in thumbprint sensor.

However

, I purchased it from the company's outlet, located in the centre of the city. When I was coming back from my trip I put my laptop on charging at the airport. After some time, I received a call from my manager to send an urgent email

as a result

, I disconnected it from the power pin and commenced using it, whereas leaving the charger in the socket. After I finish my work, I forgot to remove and keep it in my bag. Now, I realized that I have left it over there. You are requested to deliver me a new charger because the company policy says, the missed Item must be delivered to the customers if it gets misplaced during a span of one year. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Tue Jul 19 2022

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