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some people believe that experience children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect. other argue that experience is gained when they are teenage have a big influence discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #children #school #effect #influence
A section of society holds a belief that
experience
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the
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adolescents in the past are more likely will be
ultilitarian
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utilitarian
 for them, while other
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 that the
experience
 will be obtained naturally when they have
a
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power. In my opinion, every single
obstacles
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 that teenagers experienced will adulting them to be
better
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person
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people
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 in the
next
 time. On the
one
 hand,
experience
 is not something that can be purchased,
however
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 it is something that people have to go through in their
life
.
Similarly
, children have to know some basics of how
life
 works before entering
the
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school
 in order to adapt
with
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school
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 environment.
For instance
, the parents need to give their
offspring's
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 exposure
about
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 manners as it
a
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vital aspect that everyone
need
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 to
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 in
the
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life
,
nonetheless
 people still turn a blind eye to
this
 matter as it is not essential at all.
Therefore
, it can be seen numerous issues regarding students
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school's
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the school's
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 protocol.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that
the
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power is
one
 of the prominent
aspect
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 to acquire the
experience
.
Therefore
, teenagers must at least attempt to hold any position at
the
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school
 as it might be practical to enhance their leadership
skill
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skills
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.
Although
,
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 it is just a mere position, it can be
such
 a valuable
experience
 that others do not require. Teenagers must grab
this
 golden opportunity as it once in
life
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experience
. In conclusion, despite
one
 of the way to obtain
experience
 is power,
thereotically
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theoretically
 it is a challenge that
one
need
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 to overcome. I think that acquiring
experience
 is not easy as
as
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people have to face a
mulitide
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multitude
 of obstacles in their
life
.
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