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Some people think that people live in high-rise apartments are unhappy and lonely. Some think otherwise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Accommodation is always a debate-able issue . A section of society holds the belief that people who are accommodated in high-rise
buildings
 are not joyful and they feel more socially isolated
in contrast
 to people who prefer to live in homes .
This
 essay intends to discuss both views followed by my opinions in the forthcoming paragraphs with relevant illustrations . On the one side , the benefits of living in high-rise
buildings
 outweigh its associated disadvantages as safety and security inside apartment suites are more complex in comparison to their counterparts . To go into detail, these
buildings
 have all the modern safeguard devices as well as a full monitoring system that works almost 24/7 .
Therefore
 , it will be a hurricane task for someone to break into these houses.
For instance
 , All high- rise
buildings
 have security and CCTV Cameras for the supervision of activities that go on inside the building.
In other words
 , because of security , and
purpose
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 it is more secure to reside in high-altitude
buildings
.
In contrast
 to that , exposure to natural habitat and social environment is missing in a multistorey building . To be precise , there are no social communities in taller
buildings
 as it is found in residential areas so
as a result
 there will be no social gathering among neighbours on any upcoming festivals .
In addition
 to
this
 , there will lack
of
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face-to-face interaction among neighbours which is the main reason , it is considered that multistorey residents have weaker relationships either with their fellows or neighbour . To conclude that ,
although
 there are certain benefits associated with living in high rise
buildings
,
,
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unfortunately
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 we can't unsee its disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • high-rise apartments
  • unhappy
  • lonely
  • lack of community
  • social interaction
  • noise pollution
  • privacy
  • isolation
  • detachment
  • modern amenities
  • convenience
  • opportunity
  • socializing
  • building a community
  • sense of security
  • safety
  • personal preferences
  • lifestyle
  • apartment complex
  • social activities
  • facilities
  • supportive neighborhood
  • community
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