As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, the social responsibilities of companies are a hotly – debated topic. From my perspective,

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statement is absolutely true. The enterprises have an obligation to support both government and society. Specifically, during the time to run their business, the organization

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still toneed take part in social

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subscribing to charity projects, raising funds to protect children or donating budget for educational scholarships, etc. As a matter of fact,

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participation does not only have a part in improving the life quality of the residents, especially the disadvantaged people but it

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plays a significant role in brand-building and enhances the prestige of the enterprises. Obviously, the businesses are parts of a country which have the most solid economic foundation.

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, without being assisted , philanthropic organizations cannot run effectively because of financial burdens.

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, it is evident that

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is a win-win solution because a company that joins in a variety of social

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tend to be loved and advocated more by the customers. More exactly, even

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or military

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of the nation

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always need financial support from these companies. To be more precise, government and businesses have a close-knit connection, and

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is a part of social

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that the enterprise can contribute

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As an illustration, in Vietnam, during the epidemic of Covid-19, Vingroup donated a large number of medical equipment for hospitals and simultaneously they

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helped the government purchase vaccine prophylactic.

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Vietnam overcame the pandemic fastly and successfully.

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period, Vingroup became a statue in the heart of Vietnamese residents. In conclusion, the company should

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a contribution to helping the nation as soon as to develop and integrate with the world.