You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter introduce yourself explain what information you are looking for inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…………….. ,

#parent #information #school #trip #child #class #teacher #addresses #dear……………

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Dear Simon, I am Robert Niro, father of Mark, who is writing

this

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letter regarding a field

trip

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that the

school

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has organised for kindergarten students on the 5th of August.

First

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of all, I would like to know whether he has to get a swimming costume or will it be provided by the

school

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itself as the note from the

school

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does not mention anything about the swimming gear.

secondly

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, at what time should I reach

school

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to collect him? I believe there is a magic show organised for these kids later in the evening followed by some healthy refreshments. Because it is his

first

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school

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trip

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, I would like you to make a note that my son is allergic to nuts and dairy products. So, do make sure that he is not consuming food items of any kind containing these aforementioned edibles. In case of any emergency during the

trip

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, I can be reached on my mobile device, which is 9878901133. Wishing you and the other students a pleasant

trip

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. Yours faithfully, Robert Niro

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Introduction
Inquiry
Itinerary
Supervision
Emergency procedures
Accommodation
Dietary restrictions
Medical concerns
Consent form
Chaperone
Liability
Excursion
Availability
Volunteer
Grateful
Clarification
Payment details
Safety measures
Activities

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