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sudies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they could get a good job once they are released. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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A section of society holds a belief that the effective method to mitigate the crime rate is to teach the folks in prison so it will
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come in handy for them to get an occupation once they out from there. In my opinion,
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people
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On the other hand
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companies do not employ anyone who has a criminal record,
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will less likely open the public's eyes
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Therefore
, the authorities cannot turn a blind eye to
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ensure that
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For instance
, the government should hire pro educators to educate the prisoners from time to time so they can widen their horizons in getting job placement.
On the other hand
, the ex-criminals will
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no longer
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bother about how they want to
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survive
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, they can prove to others that anyone can be
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 background.
As a result
,
people
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 and encourage
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 their life. Seeing in believing, more society will respect
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these
people
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 to the ex-prisoners as often seen in the numerous news. In conclusion, there are a plethora of reasons why the authorities must apply
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reassuring
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ex-criminals.
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