Young
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development
is always important for
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society. In recent days,
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improvement has declined due to various factors like social media, spending time with peers and participating in
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cultural activities. but some claim family plays a primary role
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their
development
. In my opinion,
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teaches socialism as well as good habits which enhance their
development
.
First
of all, children developments are distracted due to the high usage of social media and
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with colleagues. They tend to spend a lot of time on social media , watching movies and get addicted to it.
For example
, my cousin used to watch a comic series on TV and his behaviour changed like the cartoon hero in web series.
In addition
, there could be serious character changes might reflect when they mix up with unwanted friendships.
This
will affect their
development
and bad reputation in their career.
On the other hand
, family are
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gamechanger
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childrenChange noun form
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development
. From
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childhood, family members teach a child to
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socialised with other
people
which
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child improvement.
For instance
, our
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trained us how to behave in society which made us
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responsible
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this
community.
Moreover
, family members educate
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young
people
by narrating good stories which stimulate their growth.
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are spoiling their life due to the reasons mentioned
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here but still parents
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responsibility for their improvement to become good
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.