Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
In
present, many Change preposition
At
people
prefer establishing their own business
to working for a company or organisation. There are some reasons why people
choose to be self-employed. Moreover
, there are some drawbacks of
establishing own Change preposition
to
business
.
Firstly
, people
choose to be self-employed because of the low salary, taking a long time to upgrade their positions and there are constraints in
their skills and thoughts. Change preposition
on
For example
, the normal salary for ordinary employees is under 200,000 kyats in Myanmar. And then
, this
finance is insufficient for their accommodation. Moreover
, it will take a long time to upgrade their positions if they worked in a company. Although
they are hard-working, there are some companies which specify the period of upgrading position. After that, they are not allowed to present their opinions openly and their skills are restricted.
However
, there are some drawbacks of
being self-employed. Change preposition
to
Firstly
, they do not have the background so that
they are essential to struggle Correct word choice
apply
hardly
to penetrate the Replace the word
hard
business
area. Secondly
, they are the ones who responsible
for everything. When they do their own job, they will need to manage in details Add a missing verb
are responsible
such
as the investment, the income as well as the stuffs
. If their own job is not strong enough to penetrate the Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
business
area, their investments will be lost. And then
, their lives will be broken because of their loss.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why people
choose to establish own
job rather than Correct pronoun usage
their own
to
work for the company. And Fix the infinitive
apply
then
, there are also
some negative impacts on their lives.Submitted by tr.zarwaihnin on
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