In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

​In the future, everybody will not purchase printed
newspapers
or
books
because they can read everything they wish online without difficulties. I totally agree with
this
statement for many reasons. ​
To begin
with
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the fact that, people prefer reading online to buying
newspapers
or
books
because of the time duration and the technological
supports
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. It takes a long time to purchase the newspaper or
books
such
as
waiting
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the newspaper’s sellers and going to the bookshops.
However
, people can read immediately everything by entering the websites which they are interested
in
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if they read online.
Moreover
, they do not need to fold the pages whenever they want to note something because there is
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saved click in online reading. After that, they are not essential to flip the page because they can skip the parts wherever they want to read. ​
Secondly
, the speed of
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reading online is faster than reading the
newspapers
and they will not be solitary when they are reading. If they read online, they can adjust the size number of words so that they are able to read rapidly and clearly. And
then
, they feel like the author is in front of us because they can leave a comment if there is something they do not understand.
Moreover
, there are lots of reading partners so that they can share their opinions and
feeling
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in
comment
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box.
Therefore
, they will not feel solitary due to their reading partners. ​In conclusion, there are several benefits of reading online.
Therefore
, I obviously agree with the statement that there is no one who
want
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to purchase
the
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newspapers
or
books
in the future as they can find everything they wish online without
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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