In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vechiles outweigh the disadvantages?

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era, technology is growing rapidly, and there are some forecasts, that in the future cars, buses and trucks don't need a driver and there will be only passengers in them. In my ,opinion the advantages of

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cars do outweigh the disadvantages. Since

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vehicles can save the cost of logistics and e-commerce

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, it will reduce

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accidents

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in future.

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, e-commerce

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as Flipkart and Amazon have to pay a significant amount to the logistics team for delivering products to the customer's doorstep.

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, if there will be a

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vehicle, distribution of the parcels will be very easy and cheap.

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companies

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can buy these self-driving vehicles, which will cut the cost of drivers and save plenty of money which they use in reducing the delivery charges of their products,

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automobiles are not only helping the company but

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consumers.

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, In electronic media and paper media, we are getting enormous bad news about the

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happening around the world, majorly at night,

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, in India there are 60% of

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happen at night and the major reason for these type of

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are a sleepy driver or not clear vision while driving.

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,technology the percentage of

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will not only be going to reduce but

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save the lives of many. To conclude, by self-driving vehicles we are not saving the cost of

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which they are spending on drivers, we are

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saving lives. We should appreciate these kinds of technologies and adapt them to our regular life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

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Traffic fatalities
Human error
Route optimization
Accessibility
Eco-friendly
Carbon emissions
Economic implications
Algorithm bias
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Cybersecurity
Technological reliance
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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vechiles outweigh the disadvantages?

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