School teachers used to be source to information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

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School

teachers

used to be sources of

information

;

however

, some

people

argue that

teachers

are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of

information

resources

. What is your opinion? Many

people

think

teachers

only can teach. And there are many technologies that we can find on computers which can allow children to find and learn

that is

easier than in old times. So , some

people

think that

teachers

are no more necessary nowadays.

However

, I think

teachers

are still necessary and important.

Firstly

although

there are many new

information

resources

, we

can’t

ask them quickly and deeply about which

resources

can’t

give to us.

For example

, when students don’t know how to do the math question, a teacher not only can teach them

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step by step but

also

give them some examples for them to know the answers easily and use in other ways. The resource only can teach us some simple, but

can’t

teach us more deeply.

However

teachers

can teach us. Secondarily, I think

teachers

steal have their faction, they not only teach us knowledge

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but

also

teach us others. They can teach us how to build relationships with different

people

. As an audit, we can learn these which

resources

can learn like our present. Some

teachers

can be our friends too. They can start with us and give us their experiences when we have problems. Obviously,

this

is the source of

information

which

can’t

teach us. They can replace our present at school, just like

teachers

as friends. To sum up,

although

there are many recourses that we can easily find everywhere,

can’t

easy to let us learn. So,

teachers

, which isn’t replaced, because they still have their factions.

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School teachers used to be source to information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

Your opinion

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