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School teachers used to be source to information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

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School
teachers
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 used to be sources of
information
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;
however
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, some
people
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 argue that
teachers
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 are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of
information
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resources
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. What is your opinion? Many
people
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 think
teachers
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 only can teach. And there are many technologies that we can find on computers which can allow children to find and learn
that is
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 easier than in old times. So , some
people
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 think that
teachers
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 are no more necessary nowadays.
However
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, I think
teachers
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 are still necessary and important.
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,
although
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 there are many new
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resources
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, we
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 ask them quickly and deeply about which
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can’t
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 give to us.
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, when students don’t know how to do the math question, a teacher not only can teach them
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step by step but
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 give them some examples for them to know the answers easily and use in other ways. The resource only can teach us some simple, but
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 teach us more deeply.
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,
teachers
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 can teach us. Secondarily, I think
teachers
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 steal have their faction, they not only teach us knowledge
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 but
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 teach us others. They can teach us how to build relationships with different
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. As an audit, we can learn these which
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 can learn like our present. Some
teachers
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 can be our friends too. They can start with us and give us their experiences when we have problems. Obviously,
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 is the source of
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 which
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 teach us. They can replace our present at school, just like
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 as friends. To sum up,
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 there are many recourses that we can easily find everywhere,
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 easy to let us learn. So,
teachers
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, which isn’t replaced, because they still have their factions.

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