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In some countires, owning a home rather than renting one is more important for some people. Why this might be the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

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In some nations, the important part of people's
life
 is having a
house
 rather than renting one.
This
 is because you do not need to be worried about finding a new
house
 after your renting time is over. You have permission to do as you would like to decorate your
home
.
This
 might be the main point for the people when they discuss
this
 kind of topic. All over the world, people need shelter for their daily running
life
 because we have to work for our way to survive
like
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 others did. And
a
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home
 meant to stay safe and sound when we are tired from our jobs or community. If you do not have a stable
home
, you always need to take care to find a new
house
 in a good environment.
On the other hand
, there is a disadvantage to owning a
house
. If you have a stable
house
 for your entire
life
, you are not allowed to explore another city or country and you will be stuck
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taking care of your own
house
. For renting a
house
, there are no difficulties like
this
 because you can move or stay by packing your own things easily and moving
one
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to another city or country might be very easy for you. So, your
life
 will be
more free
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 and you will gain a good opportunity for your job or education because you have to learn every time from everyone and every place. To conclude, having a
house
 is important for some nations and people, not everyone from every nation. There are advantages and disadvantages
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 every situation and it mostly depends on the person who is buying a stable
home
 or renting a
home
.
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