More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawback

Nowadays, an individual prefers to

study

abroad for their tertiary level rather than in their homeland.

However

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it is not a huge issue that needs to be widened as studying oversea has a plethora of merits that people do not aware

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On the one hand, some might say that education abroad is prohibitive compared to local education.

Therefore

, society needs to change

this

kind of low-class mentality as everything come with its price, to be exact, nothing is free in order for one to succeed.

For instance

,

students

who

study

at the top oversea universities probably have a higher employability rate than those who

study

locally. That indicates all the penny they expense is worth for them as it is for a long-term plan.

On the other hand

, oversea

students

can discover a new part of the world that they do not have ever seen prior. It is a once-in-the-life experience that everyone should grab as it can broaden people's perspectives.

In other words

, an individual who just studies locally will not able to feel what abroad

students

feel because they live in two whole distinct places.

For example

, abroad

students

may travel around the country where they live and it can be a stress-free coping mechanism. In conclusion, it is crystal clear indicating that the merits of who

study

abroad outweigh the demerits,

nonetheless

, it is not mean that studying locally is a bad choice. I think if the

students

have the opportunity to pursue

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either undergraduate or postgraduate level, they should grab it without

hesitant

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