Many of today’s most urgent problems can only be solved through international cooperation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays the World is going through a very difficult period since wars and climate change are putting us in terrible danger and

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some people think that every single government should face

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problem independently, the majority of us believe in an international

solution

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. First of all, climate change is the most demanding problem of them all, even if its catastrophic effects are not yet imminent, we are already facing some consequences.

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, ice caps are melting, worldwide temperatures are

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and deforestation is creating huge problems for many animals. The only way to address all these issues is altogether because in order to solve them we need a large-scale change in which all countries take responsibility.

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, wars among different nations need international intervention, since a single government can not face their consequences alone.

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, the Ukraine war is causing not only problems in its regions but

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in ours, since the devastations that have been caused by the war will be faced by all European nations, own to the fact that they import oil from

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country and from Russia,

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its opponent in the conflict. Our position on the war has cost us a huge rise in oil prices and the only way in which we will be able to have electricity next year is by finding a common

solution

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. In conclusion, as always, all the big matters need

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apply

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international intervention in order to come to a

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, since the power of a single nation is not enough to solve problems that affect all of us. Cooperation is always the answer,

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, the reason I agree with a

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on a large scale.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

282 words

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Fully explain your ideas

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