It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should the government place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of food consumed? Do you agree? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, being overweight has an enormously communal problem in the whole world. The reason that pre-cooked food and its low prices attract people to buy

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prefer fast food because

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convenient and easy to get anywhere.

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younger generation's

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diversity. It must be acknowledged, that what are the main causes and sources of obesity.

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, the price range is higher for healthy supplements rather than clutter snacks.

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, a healthy salad diet is expensive while there is trash bread like a burger you can get half price with salad, all these troubles populace's main attraction is fast foodstuff; is cheap and easy to reach without doing any effort. In my opinion, if all regimes make healthy feed cheaper and increase the higher prices of rubbish meals

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perhaps, individuals will think about it and be able to pursue themselves to buy fruits and veg spite the trash nutrients. Another way to get rid of these cis

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stop promotions

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diets and high calories products.

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rubble cooking advertisements must be prohibited in all

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. By and large, children consuming pre- cooked meals must be reduced

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obesity will reduce automatically. Authorities must accost citizens to take a high fibre diet and stay healthy

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wide world.

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diet must not be consumed by a youngster or any age group. The Administration has to increase the

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price

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eatery same like that, they increased

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of tobacco or cigarettes to get rid of

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the backbone of any society and we do not want them to to to emerge with serious

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issues.