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Some people think that music plays an important role in the society. Others think it is simply a random form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #music #role #society #form #entertainment
The global relevance of
music
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. A few
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individuals perceive that
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Music
 plays a key function in humanity, whereas others have a contrary view that, it is limited to just being a form of pleasure. These are valid points,
hence
this
 essay will discuss them and give a concluding opinion. On the one hand, those who believe that
Music
 has a positive impact
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 the public, do so because
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 it is a good source of income.
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, a lot of
persons
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 have transformed into billionaire celebrities owing to
Music
 sales and
performance
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. A good example is the likes of Jay Z, Tu face and the rest.
Furthermore
,
Music
 has a major influence on mood. people tend to listen to a particular genre of
music
 at a time depending on how they feel.
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, a recent study has shown that
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songs
lightens
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mood
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,
reduces
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 anxiety and depression, and even boost memory.
On the other hand
, people who feel
music
 is just a form of entertainment do so because of the fact that individuals care more about the melody rather than the lyrics.
Often times
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, some
songs
 which pass inferior messages are being cheered and danced to, due to the tune it carries.
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,
songs
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 of pleasure in events, which cuts across cultural, religious and other aspects. In conclusion, despite
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 people see caring about only the
songs
' lyrics and using it as a source of pleasure at events as being the reason for
music
 serving just the purpose of entertainment, the aforementioned reasons would seem to make me support the view that, it has a key role to play in the society.
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