Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
In our modern society, the
environment
is always a hotly- debated topic. This
is the fact that human beings are damaging the environment
seriously in various aspects. Therefore
both governments should offer laws to protect it and the
individuals Correct article usage
apply
also
need to know their responsibilities for saving the environment
.
Obviously, human beings are ruining the natural habitats seriously in a variety of ways. Firstly
, the air is affected dramatically by the ever-increasing of citizens and their private transportation. Since the
vehicles Correct article usage
apply
is
leading to air pollution Change the verb form
are
such
as:
the Remove the comma
apply
omnipresent
of private cars and motorbike, especially Replace the word
omnipresence
metropolis
Change preposition
in metropolis
such
as Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh city. Consequently
, All these things can demolish ozone
layer and cause the greenhouse effect seriously. Correct article usage
the ozone
Furthermore
, the factory is more established and the amount of waste were
eliminated into rivers, lakes, etc. Not only does the manufactory make an impact but the Change the verb form
was
people
are also
a part of direct bringing out a non-biodegradable ingredients
or slow decomposition. Correct the article-noun agreement
non-biodegradable ingredients
a non-biodegradable ingredient
Furthermore
, It create
serious negative ramification Change the verb form
creates
to
water that results in disease Change preposition
for
of
Change preposition
apply
people
and die
of organism sea. Replace the word
death
Besides
, the exploitation minerals
, deforestation or animal hunting, etc, Change preposition
of minerals
also
cause floods, change clime and make serious effects to
Change preposition
on
soil
Add an article
the soil
environment
.
Therefore
, one immediate practical solution is Fix the infinitive
to belong
belong
to the government that gives out strongly measure and law for treatment, warm for the Wrong verb form
belonging
people
who have behavioursCorrect your spelling
opposed
itoppose
. Correct your spelling
oppose
Next
, the government can launch, propaganda, invite, canvass
Correct word choice
and canvass
to
everyone about Change preposition
apply
protect
Wrong verb form
protecting
environment
. Add an article
the environment
For example
, in the school always organize for students have one-day cleaning labour surround school or organize activities exam draw or write about protect environment
and students had Add an article
the environment
responsible
to project Replace the word
responded
environment
“green-clean-beautiful”. Correct your spelling
Moreover
Moreovers
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
should plant and use Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
pulic
vehicles and just know how to classify garbage, Correct your spelling
public
tackle
Correct word choice
and tackle
correctly
to improve the Correct pronoun usage
it correctly
environment
.
In conclusion, the environment
life is very important so it needs to be protected to the people
and every have life strongly develop.Submitted by phuongthao.3822 on
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