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Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

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In
this
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 modern world, It is quite important to know different languages. Some believe that in order to be fluent in a certain
language
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, they should resident in that
country
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 and work for some time.
however
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, In my perspective, I strongly disagree with
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 statement and the reasons for
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 will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin
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 with, there are advantages of moving to a
country
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 in order to learn their native
language
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.
For instance
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, one of the researches done at Clifford University
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 discovered that speaking to different people is the best way to be fluent in a
language
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 rather than attending
language
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 classes.
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, It helps you to identify the commonly used word on day to day basis which is one of the key tactics to learning a particular
language
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 much faster.
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, it helps you to avoid unnecessary pressure.
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,
although
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 at the start it puts you a lot of pressure living in another
country
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 and trying to learn their
language
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, later ,on it eases out the unnecessary pressure.
On the other hand
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,
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 it has a certain level of advantages, it is not a must! If you managed to find a good class locally, you can easily learn the
language
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 you are interested in.
In addition
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, the internet managed to bridge the gap between countries in a significant way, and because of that people can easily register for online classes or watch videos to familiarise themselves with a
language
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.
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, you could join community groups or clubs that speak the
language
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 you want to be fluent in. In conclusion,
this
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 essay has discussed both pros and cons of learning a particular
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 by moving to a
country
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 where people speak the same.
However
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, I strongly disagree that it is a must that someone should move because there are plenty of ways to be fluent in a
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 by staying in your own
country
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.
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