It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Travelling to different parts of the world is no longer considered an effective way to learn about different cultures since other platforms
such
as
books
,
films
, and the Internet can provide users with more convenient access. I strongly disagree with
this
point of view due to several reasons. Regarding
books
,
films
, and the Internet, it is undeniable that these
sources
of
information
have positive impacts on
people
thanks to their convenience and vivid illustration. Since
books
and
films
are readily available on many smartphones
people
can broaden their horizons without spending much money on travelling.
This
is economically viable, especially for undergraduates who do not have much money.
However
, these
sources
of
information
are not always trustworthy since there is no stringent imposition of censorship and unqualified individuals can
also
be a contributor,
thus
easily leaving audiences under misapprehension.
For example
, Wikipedia, one of the most famous
sources
of
information
, sometimes provides unreliable data.
On the other hand
, I vehemently hold that travelling will have a greater influence on learners’ experience in terms of cultural events.
Firstly
, should
people
set their foot in a remote area, they will have a chance to immerse themselves in the joy and excitement of local activities which cannot be described by words or distorted for commercial purposes.
Secondly
, it is easier to memorize
information
about culture when
people
physically engage in these cultural activities.
For instance
, only when western
people
learn how to make Chung cake to prepare for the Tet holiday will they conceive of the pride and eagerness that Vietnamese
people
feel on
this
day, which could not be found in
books
or newspapers.
Therefore
, having practical experience is more important for students if they want to learn more about culture. In conclusion,
although
books
,
films
, and the Internet may help learners widen their cultural knowledge thanks to appealing images, these
sources
of
information
cannot provide
information
that is
as authentic as practical experience which can
also
assist them to remember longer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural immersion
  • authentic experiences
  • diverse perspectives
  • comprehensive
  • historical context
  • facilitates
  • sensory and emotional depth
  • holistic understanding
  • cultural bias
  • stereotypes
  • discernment
  • virtual reality
  • convenience of access
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