Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think it is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days teenagers place a premium on new technology
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book. Some people think
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it is a good trend, while
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others argue that, it is a problem. I completely opine that it is a positive change.
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there are a variety of things that can be done by technology. Even reading
books
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, you can listen to a podcast, read a pdf or watch a cartoon or movie of that book.
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range of videos and clips have been uploaded on
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you can learn a lot from them.
For instance
, I have learned how to cook.
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work, I easily google it.
Furthermore
, you can visit other places online. Not
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thing, it takes more time to read different
books
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seconds to find the result or solution to your problem. In the forthcoming; paragraph I could deal with,
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advantage.
Although
gadgets are useful for learning,
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book in their hands. To conclude, gone is the idea that technology is not good and we only need to read
books
to gain knowledge.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interactivity
  • multimedia resources
  • educational apps
  • global connectivity
  • imagination
  • critical thinking
  • attention span
  • concentration
  • vocabulary depth
  • literary knowledge
  • cultural awareness
  • digital literacy
  • conventional reading
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