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Most people say that in order for one to be fluent in a language, they must live and work for sometime in that Country. Do you agree/disagree?

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A large number of people believe that
language
 fluency is dependent on having acquittance with the indigenes by way of living in that
country
. In as much as
this
 could help in enhancing
one
's ability in speaking, in my opinion speaking in a different mother tongue can easily be learnt in other ways.
This
 essay will discuss some of the ways.
Firstly
, staying in a particular society is a great advantage for conversing in that dialect. Especially if English is not generally spoken there.
This
 means that it will be difficult to communicate with an individual when there's a
language
 barrier, as
such
one
 will be compelled to pick up the local dialect to carry out his or her day-to-day activities. Moreso, meeting the natives face to face to buy and sell can boost fast understanding and communication. ,
Also
 daily discussions with colleagues and neighbours would help in motivating
one
 to the quick grasping of the
language
. But in my ,opinion
language
 can be learnt in different ways other than living in that
country
. Being that as it may, linguistics nowadays
,
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 is studied in most learning institutions. As a case in point, french is taught in my
country
 in all schools, from elementary to secondary level.
Furthermore
, in tertiary institutions,
one
 has the option to study any foreign
language
 taught in the school and major in it without having to travel or live in that
country
. Moreso with the advent of technology which has brought about online education. A lot of people learn languages across the globe on the internet. Dedication and passion can enable
one
 to be an expert speaker even though
one
 has never lived there. Joining an online community of speakers is
also
 of great advantage which can be done from the comfort of your home. Aside from
this
 ,
one
 on
one
language
 tutoring is beneficial. Anyone can learn through these mediums.
Lastly
, learning a
language
 does not require
one
 physical presence in that society to be fluent. People can learn from anywhere and anyone as long as their interests and passion are there.
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