Some individuals are of the opinion that pupils should take a
gap
year
between high school and university, to explore and improve
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. There are many good sides to
this
idea but I believe that
this
opinion
also
has a bad side.
There is no doubt that having a
gap
year
between college and high school will help
one
expand herself and hone her skills through different experiences.
For example
, when
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to another country, due to the adventure of finding a way or a place to stay,
likewise
communicating to buy food will help
one
learn to adapt to different cultures and situations, develop communication skills,and sometimes it is possible to pick up new foreign languages.
Moreover
,
this
break is
also
a time for an individual to look into her inner soul in order to find out what she really needs and prefers, or what her strengths and weaknesses are, based on it will identify a suitable career path for those who are still confused about their future. From the two points
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to admit that if the
gap
year
is not happening, the individual might not know what she truly wanted and
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in
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wrong major which lead
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to a bad result
such
as: she will struggle with her studies and waste a colossal amount of money on tuition fees, on the major that she
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.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I
also
believe that
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year
in
such
a critical period will produce adverse effects on individuals.
First
of all, when
one
has
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gap
year
, your peers
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or
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to work and are
one
step closer to success.
This
will create an implicit comparison deep inside that makes individuals lose
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confidence and momentum to study.
Secondly
, when you go back to school after a long time being absent,
people will have a hard time resuming their education. In the worst scenario, some students will drop out because they can not follow the lesson and atmosphere of the college anymore, and go back to doing
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dreams without a degree.
Thirdly
, there is a case that if the
gap
year
involves international travel and living abroad,
then
an
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year
-old gapper without any experience in planning and budgeting might be at risk of running out of money,
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tricked into doing something illegal for money.
Furthermore
, a
gap
year
to go to another country might be extortionately expensive, because
one
will have to take into consideration a host of expenses including transportation, accommodation, and food.
In conclusion, a break between
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and college to go to work or experience travelling abroad
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both advantages and disadvantages.