Some people believe that international news should be included in the syllabus of secondary school students. Do you agree or disagree?

News
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has always been a part of social,
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and political welfare. A few individuals got to hold the idea that international or national
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is beneficial for higher secondary school
students
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if the
news
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is added to the syllabus
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elaborate on the view of why I completely agree with
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with, they admit that
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has always influenced different aspects of life an individual and society. As we progress on
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news
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has given us a vision of how the
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work
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education
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, especially higher secondary
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education
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it can benefit the student how the social norms and cultural conflicts occur around the
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as
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an extracurricular
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activity during the past time or recess. They develop a habit of reading new languages or may get
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knowing about
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and economic status around the
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.
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, International
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plays a major role in schooling and
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When
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exploit
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as a guide for obtaining synthesised sources and
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assimilating knowledge for study material.
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moreover
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, career
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gives a major advantage in finding suitable and various career jobs that can be sought around the
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within
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shown in the
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there is a drawback to point on in some scenarios that
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tends to deviate
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from the
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which
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misleads
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can affect
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student opinion. In conclusion,
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greatly benefits and influences
education
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and
students
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' knowledge proficiency. In my opinion, knowing about the outside
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through
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the news
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is more advantageous in their career and
education
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task response
Plan the essay before you write. Say clearly that you agree and keep this view in most parts.
task response
Give two clear reasons with small, easy ideas that fit the point. Add a short example for each.
coherence
Make a simple plan: intro, 2 body parts, then a short ending. Use clear order in each paragraph.
coherence
Use small linking words like and, but, also, so to show how ideas go from one idea to the next.
quality of argument
You show a clear view that you agree with the idea.
content
You talk about how news can help students to learn about the world.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example
Topic Vocabulary:
  • global perspective
  • current affairs
  • critical thinking skills
  • cultural awareness
  • empathy
  • language skills
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