It is a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much high salery than other workers in tha same company. Do you agree or disagree?

Paying
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salary
sales
salery
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salary
from a
company
to workers by their positions can remember them
to
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of
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their value
for
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to
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company
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the company
a company
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. Some argued that
campany
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company
should provide high salaries to their high employees than normal employees. I believe that giving
wage
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to
worker
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workers
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according to their rank in a
company
is entirely justified, but we should be careful that it cannot create any contraposition.  For a
company
, offering payment to
employer
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employers
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consequent to their ability can encourage
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the employer
an employer
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employer
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employers
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to work better. A
company
should give more money to their special talent than less valuable labourer which
motivate
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motivates
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them to work with more energy
as a result
company
will
developed
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develop
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their condition
in
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apply
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financially and structurally.
For example
, a
company
used to pay more
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salary
salery
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salary
to their Manager than their Guard because a manager
have
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more responsibility than
guard
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a guard
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, he/she
maintain
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maintains
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the whole organisation. If
company
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a company
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face any detriment to their whole condition, a
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manager
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manger
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manager
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have
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has
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to answer for
this
.
Hence
, a
company
should provide high
wage
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wages
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to their highly valuable
worker
.
On the other hand
, giving
salery
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salary
to
labourer
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labourers
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to their position can create a dissimilarity among them.
Senior
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A senior
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officer
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officers
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who get big
salery
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salary
than
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ordinary
ordinay
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ordinary
worker
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workers
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can bring arrogance
on
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to
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their mind resulting in they can behave badly
to
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toward
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the less
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less paid
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less-paid
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worker
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workers
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which can destroy a
companies
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company's
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social bonding and community degeneration.
For instance
, we often see in large
companies
that
a boos
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boos
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when talking with their
companies
normal staff
such
as Tea boy or a
worker
who maintain
comapnies
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companies
cleaning, he always shout with them like they have no effort to
this
company
which can lead to
bring
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bringing
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companies
and social inequalities. So, a
salery
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salary
difference can take
varience
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variance
on campaniles situation and social life. In conclusion, it is needed for
company
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the company
a company
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to pay high
salery
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salary
to their main important recruiters. I think that paying more
wage
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wages
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to senior management employers than less
valauable
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valuable
employers is a good
things
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thing
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for
company
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the company
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, but
i
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I
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also
think that it can create dissimilarity
into
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in
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them. So, a
company
should have to
be carefully handle
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it.
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