It is a good thing if senior management workers in a company get a much high salery than other workers in tha same company. Do you agree or disagree?
Paying
Correct your spelling
salary
sales
salery
from a Correct your spelling
salary
company
to workers by their positions can remember them to
their value Change preposition
of
for
Change preposition
to
company
. Some argued that Add an article
the company
a company
campany
should provide high salaries to their high employees than normal employees. I believe that giving Correct your spelling
company
wage
to Fix the agreement mistake
wages
worker
according to their rank in a Fix the agreement mistake
workers
company
is entirely justified, but we should be careful that it cannot create any contraposition.
For a company
, offering payment to employer
consequent to their ability can encourage Fix the agreement mistake
employers
Add an article
the employer
an employer
employer
to work better. A Fix the agreement mistake
employers
company
should give more money to their special talent than less valuable labourer which motivate
them to work with more energy Change the verb form
motivates
as a result
company
will developed
their condition Change the verb form
develop
in
financially and structurally. Change preposition
apply
For example
, a company
used to pay more Correct your spelling
salary
salery
to their Manager than their Guard because a manager Correct your spelling
salary
have
more responsibility than Change the verb form
has
guard
, he/she Correct article usage
a guard
maintain
the whole organisation. If Correct subject-verb agreement
maintains
company
face any detriment to their whole condition, a Correct article usage
a company
Correct your spelling
manager
manger
Correct your spelling
manager
have
to answer for Change the verb form
has
this
. Hence
, a company
should provide high wage
to their highly valuable Fix the agreement mistake
wages
worker
.
On the other hand
, giving salery
to Correct your spelling
salary
labourer
to their position can create a dissimilarity among them. Fix the agreement mistake
labourers
Senior
Add an article
A senior
The senior
officer
who get big Fix the agreement mistake
officers
salery
than Correct your spelling
salary
Correct your spelling
ordinary
ordinay
Correct your spelling
ordinary
worker
can bring arrogance Fix the agreement mistake
workers
on
their mind resulting in they can behave badly Change preposition
to
to
Change preposition
toward
Add an article
the less
a less
less paid
Add a hyphen
less-paid
worker
which can destroy a Fix the agreement mistake
workers
companies
social bonding and community degeneration. Change noun form
company's
For instance
, we often see in large companies
that a boos
when talking with their Correct the article-noun agreement
boos
a boo
companies
normal staff such
as Tea boy or a worker
who maintain comapnies
cleaning, he always shout with them like they have no effort to Correct your spelling
companies
this
company
which can lead to bring
Change the verb form
bringing
companies
and social inequalities. So, a salery
difference can take Correct your spelling
salary
varience
on campaniles situation and social life.
In conclusion, it is needed for Correct your spelling
variance
company
to pay high Add an article
the company
a company
salery
to their main important recruiters. I think that paying more Correct your spelling
salary
wage
to senior management employers than less Fix the agreement mistake
wages
valauable
employers is a good Correct your spelling
valuable
things
for Change the noun form
thing
company
, but Add an article
the company
a company
i
Change the capitalization
I
also
think that it can create dissimilarity into
them. So, a Change preposition
in
company
should have to be carefully handle
it.Change the verb form
carefully handle
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