Some people think that economic development is the only way to end poverty while others believe that it is causing damage to the environment and so should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently some individuals think that financial expansion is the single way to diminish poverty ,

while

on the other,it is jeopardizing the environment owing to the fact it should be stopped .

This

essay will try to analyze both sides and

then

I will give my perspective on

this

issue before deducing a conclusion. Primarily ,if we look at world history ,without economic advancement,no country can not progress

further

.

In other words

,no matter how much a nation is environmentally sound ,if there is no escalating

economy

,within a second the whole scenario will change.If we look at

Sri-lanka

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Sri Lanka

,a state that had been always in good books for its inhabitants' profound respect for nature ,is now considered one of the worst economies in the whole world.

Although

, they used to earn hefty amounts of money from tourist spots,

however

,in all these years they failed to take any pragmatic steps to ameliorate their

economy

in comparison to other neighbouring countries

such

as making enormous infrastructures or creating more employment .

On the contrary

,financial development not only escalates a country's

economy

but

also

is imperative to mitigate economic challenges.To explain it

further

,if we look at the Malaysian

Economy

,it is exemplary that in a country where no one would have

hardly

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believed that they

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be successful in making an affluent territory within twenty

years

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they have built their first monument ,and

that is

of course with their own budget.These developments were only possible as Mahathir Mohammed ,who was Malaysia's prime minister , not only

make

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wise investments in

Palm-oil

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palm oil

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but

also

created jobs for technology for Malaya in fortified

economical

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conditions. I think yes economic development is important but owing to the fact that

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industries are jeopardizing ecological balance,I believe, a green economic zone would be more pertinent where

along with

financial gain,environmental nurturing is equally taken care of. To sum ,up

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development is imperative to uproot poverty from the dominion but it can be done more efficaciously if a green concept is introduced to alleviate a more sustainable and stable way in the long run.