Some argue younger people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while others think this is a good idea. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Same individual believe that young are not able to hold vital Responsibility, Owing to lack of experience. Others think that younger is good to manage positions. I think apply within of stipulated time.
this
a
controversial subject which we will be discussed in the coming paragraph.
Add a missing verb
is a
Firstly
, Younger are not good with experience but they are known for to grab
the post quickly. Change the verb form
grabbing
Thus
, Elder people are well known but using an old methods
in his work station, which jobs are not getting done in a Correct the article-noun agreement
old methods
an old method
properly
manner. Replace the word
proper
For Example
, the New generation has a good amount of knowledge of technology. They can use that method assigned work easily finishCorrect word choice
and
Moreover
, our economy has not strong as as
other developed countries. Remove the redundancy
apply
This
is a big issue for developing countries to make a strong financial nations
. To illustrate, In the US, Correct the article-noun agreement
a strong financial nation
strong financial nations
UK
and other developed nations people are taking retirement after the age of 55 and providing opportunities to youth to help to grow our economy straight. Nowadays, very important for the nation to use Correct article usage
the UK
a
new methods like the internet and other software which can help Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
to
the country. Change preposition
apply
However
, positions will get vacant for a new generation as well as their salary will be not teaching
to the sky.
To conclude, both generations will be good for a position as of now Wrong verb form
taught
Although
junior acting will more
beneficial for the government to hold Add a missing verb
be more
stand
. Correct article usage
a stand
Thus
, they are a dearth of experience,
but will manage the profitability very wildly. it is better to grant an opportunity for them to be a crucial post in the government.Remove the comma
apply
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