Modern technology is now very common in most work place. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

The charts represent the
percentage
of rewards with the US airlines and the satisfaction rate with aspects of air
traveling
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in 3 years: 1999, 2000, 2007. At
first
glance, the highest proportion of significant satisfaction was in 2007 with 72% while the rewarding of the airline had the lowest
percentage
(below 70%).
In contrast
, the dissatisfied rating only had approximately one-
third
of than reward. The proportion of striking dissatisfaction was at a peak with 32% in the chart. Plus, the
percentage
of unpleased rate decreased slightly in 2000 (with 29%) and 2007 (with 24%). Specifically, the satisfaction with courtesy of flight attendants and ticket price had the highest
percentage
in 2007 with 92% and 65%.
Besides
that in 2000, the heading below is lower whether the courtesy of check-in gates was at a peak with 89% and had the same proportion of schedules within 2007 at 79.
Moreover
, the comfort of seats is only had rated in 2007 with 47%.
However
, the lowest rewarding aspect of the airline is in 1999. In general, the pleased rating in aspects of the airline of customers is higher over time. It can be seen that their effort in developing facilities decreases dissatisfaction.
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