A magazine wants to include conntributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me the most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, Since you have asked

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contribute to your upcoming article in the magazine 'Global Times', I am writing to share my feedback for a

book

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that really influenced me. The

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is called "The Fit Indian", and it is written by the very famous fitness and nutrition coach, "Vishnu Mohan". Because it is a road map to the ultimate fit body, the methods and techniques shared are super easy to follow, which is why it is one of the bestsellers in India.

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, the author talks about how he transformed himself with dedication and hard work, and it is pretty relatable. After reading the

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, I was able to identify my weak areas, and why I crave fast food. The one method that was really interesting was the HIIT method, which stands for High-Intensity Interval Training. Undoubtedly, people have many health issues these days, and it has become extremely important to make them aware of their faulty dietary habits which are a part of their sedentary lifestyle. Both of these are included in the

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, and

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, it must be a good read for people who have no clue where to start their fitness journey from. I certainly believe

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would be a positive influence on people all around the globe. I hope my feedback will be valuable to you. Yours faithfully, Jay Arora

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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