You are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday part for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite him/her to the party. In your letter: - explain the reason for the party - give the date abd time of the party - suggest what the classmate could bring to the party

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Dear Tom, I hope you're well. I'm actually writing to invite you to Harish's birthday party, which will be a surprise for him, so please do not let him know. I know all of us are so busy with our assignments and we surely need a break, so I thought it would be nice to celebrate his birthday here at the school. In fact, he has been feeling very low for the past few days. Since he is really close to me, he told me that he is missing his family, and it is for the

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time that he'

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be away from home on

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special day. So, I thought it would be nice to throw a surprise party for him. His birthday is

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Friday, and we don't have any submissions on that day. As we'

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be free after 5 p.m., I have kept that start time to be 6 in the evening. The cake-cutting ceremony will not take place until 8 p.m., so make sure you inform your folks in advance that you'

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be a little late.

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, since everyone is bringing some kind of snack or beverage, I hope you could bring some wafers yourself. Apart from that, your mother makes

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delicious semolina pudding and everyone loves it, especially Harish, so I hope it wouldn't be much to ask you to get that too, only if your mother agrees. Do not miss the party. We'

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have a blast! Warm wishes, Jay

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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246 words

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