Your friend recently moved to the same town you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter describe why you go to this gym say what part of this gym you recommend explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Sam, Hope you are liking to stay in my neighbourhood. I am writing you a letter because I have a plan for us to hit the gym together. In fact, it will help us to stay fit and inspire each other. I have been going to the Goldstar gym since 2009 and it is one of the best ones in our vicinity. It has got state-of-the-art equipment and certified trainers. My personal coach plans my workout according to my potential and limitations on a monthly basis.

Hence

, I prefer visiting

this

place thrice a week to shed some fat. Personally, I like doing cardio exercise because the gym has got treadmills with the latest functions and it has been maintained well. I know that you were looking forward to having good muscle built and

this

place will help you to achieve your burning desire. Kindly let me know your thoughts on the same. Best wishes, Devika

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