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With advances in technological communication more and more people are able to work from home. This increase of homeworking had been of real benefit to workers.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the advancement of online communication platforms, many people can
work
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home
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 without going to their
office
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. Despite
time
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-saving and
flexibility
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, I disagree that homeworking is the real benefit for workers due to the issues of concentration and
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time-management
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time management
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. On the one hand, one of the advantages of working from
home
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 is that employees can no longer go to their office within a scheduled
time
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. It can save
time
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-consuming because traffic and preparation
time
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 for
work
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are
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 not necessary when working from
home
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.
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, flexible working hours can reduce their workload.
For instance
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, if the worker is a parent, they can
work
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their
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on their
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 assignment at night when their children sleep. In the
day
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daytime
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time
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, they can
also
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 spend their
time
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 with family due to the benefit of
flexibility
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.
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, there are some drawbacks
of
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 homeworking. Despite
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flexibility
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the flexibility
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, it is difficult to concentrate on their
work
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, especially when the task needs to be finished by a tight deadline because of the challenges of noise around their environment and other distractions
such
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 as family problems and accommodation issues. A good example
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 distraction would be frequent power outages that can hinder concentration on tasks.
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, scheduling specific
time
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 for task achievement is not possible almost all the
time
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. In some cases, there may be urgent requests to be accomplished even on weekends.
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, staff cannot handle
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time-management
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time management
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 due to overload and they are overwhelmed by unforeseen challenges
such
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 as technical problems which results
in
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time
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-consuming. To conclude,
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 homeworking provides
time
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-saving and
flexibility
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 for workers to some extent, employees can experience a lack of focus on
work
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 and can be poor in
time
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- management when confronting barriers in their
home
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.

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